What country has the most interesting customs?
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I think that the happy funeral of Ghana is the most interesting custom. They think that the dead people should go their way happily. It is interesting because we mainly think that the funeral is the depressing event.
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Here\'s your composition, [이름] and I must say that you picked a highly interesting custom. Nice one!
Catch you on Wednesday!
Cheers,
Jean~~
I think that the happy funeral of Ghana is the most interesting custom.
>> or: I think that the celebratory funeral of Ghana where they have dancing pallbearers is the most interesting custom.
They think that the dead people should go their way happily.
>> They believe that the dead people should go their way happily.
It is interesting because we mainly think that the funeral is the depressing event.
>> It is interesting because we mainly think that funerals are depressing events.
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