What country has the most interesting what you visited?
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Teacher. I changed my homework question.
>>CORRECT
Because \"What country has the most interesting custom?\" is very difficult for me.
Please understand. lol
>>CORRECT
->Actaully, I visited China, Janpan, Philliphines, Singapore, Thailand, Hongkong.
>> ->Actually, I visited China, Japan, Philliphines, Singapore, Thailand, and Hong Kong.
I really enjoyed contries what I visited. But, if someone asked me, I will tell Thailand is most interesting country for me.
>> I really enjoyed contries what I visited. But, if someone asked me, I will tell Thailand is most interesting country for me.
I went Thailand for 2 times.
>>I visited Thailand two times
First time, I visited there with my coworkers for beauty expo.
>>During my first visit, I went on a beauty expo with my friends.
Foods are good match with us. So we could eat everything in Bankok, Thailand.
>>We love food. We could eat everything in Bangkok, Thailand.
And club is really good. One of club has 4? 5 type room. So we can choose the music and dance.
>>The clubs there were really good. There are four to five different types of rooms in a club. We can choose different kinds of music genres and also different types of dances.
It was really interesting for us. And club size is also surprised.
>>It was really interesting for us, and the club size is also surprising.
OR
>>>>It was really interesting for us, and we were surprised by the size of the club.
Second time, I visited there with my friends.
>>I visited with my friends for the second time.
Bangkok has good tourist Attractions.
>>Bangkok has good tourist attractions.
One of them is Asiatique that has good restarant and shipping center. And we touched the night view.
>>One of them is \"Asiatique\". It has a good restarant and a shipping center. And we enjoyed the night view.
I hope I go there again with my love people.
>> I hope to go back there again, with the people that I love.
Thank you for answering your homework. I enjoyed reading your homework about your experience in Bangkok Thailand. ^^
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