What country has the most interesting what you visited?

2019-01-24 · 첨삭 강사 Vance

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What country has the most interesting what you visited? Teacher. I changed my homework question. Because \"What country has the most interesting custom?\" is very difficult for me. Please understand. lol ->Actaully, I visited China, Janpan, Philliphines, Singapore, Thailand, Hongkong. I really enjoyed contries what I visited. But, if someone asked me, I will tell Thailand is most interesting country for me. I went Thailand for 2 times. First time, I visited there with my coworkers for beauty expo. Foods are good match with us. So we could eat everything in Bankok, Thailand. And club is really good. One of club has 4? 5 type room. So we can choose the music and dance. It was really interesting for us. And club size is also surprised. Second time, I visited there with my friends. Bangkok has good tourist Attractions. One of them is Asiatique that has good restarant and shipping center. And we touched the night view. I hope I go there again with my love people.

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Teacher. I changed my homework question.

>>CORRECT


 Because \"What country has the most interesting custom?\" is very difficult for me.
Please understand. lol

>>CORRECT

 ->Actaully, I visited China, Janpan, Philliphines, Singapore, Thailand, Hongkong.

>> ->Actually, I visited China, Japan, Philliphines, Singapore, Thailand, and Hong Kong.


 I really enjoyed contries what I visited. But, if someone asked me, I will tell Thailand is most interesting country for me.

>> I really enjoyed contries what I visited. But, if someone asked me, I will tell Thailand is most interesting country for me.


 I went Thailand for 2 times.

>>I visited Thailand two times


 First time, I visited there with my coworkers for beauty expo.

>>During my first visit, I went on a beauty expo with my friends.


 Foods are good match with us. So we could eat everything in Bankok, Thailand.

>>We love food. We could eat everything in Bangkok, Thailand.


 And club is really good. One of club has 4? 5 type room. So we can choose the music and dance.

>>The clubs there were really good. There are four to five different types of rooms in a club. We can choose different kinds of music genres and also different types of dances.


It was really interesting for us. And club size is also surprised. 

>>It was really interesting for us, and the club size is also surprising. 

OR

>>>>It was really interesting for us, and we were surprised by the size of the club.


 Second time, I visited there with my friends.

>>I visited with my friends for the second time.


 Bangkok has good tourist Attractions.

>>Bangkok has good tourist attractions.


One of them is Asiatique that has good restarant and shipping center. And we touched the night view.

>>One of them is \"Asiatique\". It has a good restarant and a shipping center. And we enjoyed the night view.


 I hope I go there again with my love people.

>> I hope to go back there again, with the people that I love.


Thank you for answering your homework. I enjoyed reading your homework about your experience in Bangkok Thailand. ^^

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