What country would be fun to work in?
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It would be fun to work in Sweden. It charges about 70% of salary in tax, but the government gives a lot of benefits like good welfare. So, I think that working in Sweden would be fun to work.
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It would be fun to work in Sweden.
>> correct
It charges about 70% of salary in tax, but the government gives a lot of benefits like good welfare.
>> It has about a 70% marginal tax rate, but the government gives a lot of benefits like good welfare.
So, I think that working in Sweden would be fun to work.
>> So, I think that working in Sweden would be fun.
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