What country would you like to visit?

2023-12-28 · 첨삭 강사 Camille

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I want to visit Japan, China, Russia, Indo and seboo island. Japan is I want to eat Sussi. And China is I want to look pandas, annd I want to eat Mandu. And Russia, I want to look snow. And Indo is I want to eat curri and nan bread. And lastly seboo island I want to eat seboo\'s bananas too. These things are I want to go Japan, China, Russia, Indo and Seboo island.

강사 첨삭

Good day, [이름]!
Thank you so much for taking time in answering the question. Your ideas and opinions are on point. Keep it up! :)
~ T. Camille

I want to visit Japan, China, Russia, Indo and seboo island.

>> I want to visit Japan, China, Russia, Indonesia and Cebu island in the Philippines.

Japan is I want to eat Sussi.

>> I want to eat sushi in Japan.

And China is I want to look pandas, annd I want to eat Mandu.

>> And in China, I want to see pandas, and I want to eat dumplings.

And Russia, I want to look snow.

>> And in Russia, I want to see the snow.

And Indo is I want to eat curri and nan bread.

>> In Indonesia, I want to eat curry and bread.

And lastly seboo island I want to eat seboo\'s bananas too.

>> Lastly, I want to go to Cebu island in the Philippines to eat bananas.
These things are I want to go Japan, China, Russia, Indo and Seboo island.

>> The places that I want to go to are: Japan, China, Russia, Indonesia, and Cebu island in the Philippines.

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