What country would you like to visit and why?

2021-07-08 · 첨삭 강사 Elise

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The country I want to visit is France. Why? I want to go there see the Elpel Tower. And I want to take a picture in front of the Elpel Tower.

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Hi [이름]! ^^

Travelling is such an exciting thing to do. We can do a lot of things and experience a lot of memories. Although nowadays, I think it is not ideal since there\'s a pandemic. When all of this is over, then maybe we can start travelling again. :)

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The country I want to visit is France.

>> CORRECT

Why? I want to go there see the EipelTower.

>> I want to go there to see the Eiffel Tower.

And I want to take a picture in front of the Elpel Tower.

>> I also want to take a picture in front of it.

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