What culture besides your own do you admire and why?
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I am an agnostic, but I was really surprised and liked the thought and lifestyle of Buddhism.
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Because I think its ideas are quite similar with the principle of the modern science.
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For example, nowadays, physicists say the flow of time is not being relative depending on the status of the objects.
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This can be fast or slow and even there is a possibility that it moves on a loop.
>> This may be fast or slow and there is even a possibility that it moves on a loop.
The one that I read about Buddhism is about time at the aspect of a human life.
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It denies that time goes following a linear road.
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We exist just this moment, so to concentrate now is crucial, not to be stuck in past or not to worry about the uncertainty of the future.
>> We exist just this moment, so to concentrate now is crucial, not to be stuck in the past or not to worry about the uncertainty of the future.
In addition, a famous concept of this religion is all live things are on the wheel of life and we are going to reincarnate forever.
>> In addition, a famous concept of this religion is that all living things are on the wheel of life and we are going to reincarnate forever.
Both the physics theories and the religious doctrines are so difficult to me, but these connections make me admire Buddhism and give me a chance to think about my life more deeply.
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