What culture in South Korea are you most proud of?
학생이 쓴 원문
South Korea has a special proud culture.
When I order something by delivery, the deliveryman leaves that at front of door.
If I forget to pick it up, it stays there all day. No one takes it.
I use my laptop at a coffee shop and leave it with my bag and I go to the bathroom.
When I come back to my table, no one touches my belongings.
강사 첨삭
Hi Jennifer:)
People there are very disciplined. I hope it is the same with other countries as well.
South Korea has a special proud culture.
>> South Korea has a special culture that I a proud of.
When I order something by delivery, the deliveryman leaves that at front of door.
>> When I order something by delivery, the deliveryman leaves it at the front door.
If I forget to pick it up, it stays there all day. No one takes it.
>> CORRECT
I use my laptop at a coffee shop and leave it with my bag and I go to the bathroom.
>> I use my laptop in a coffee shop and leave it with my bag when I go to the bathroom.
When I come back to my table, no one touches my belongings.
>> CORRECT
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