What culture in South Korea would you like to change and why?
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I\'d like to change a Confucian culture in South Korea. Because It makes me feel intimidated. When I suggest opinions to the older people. And it\'s the culture that forces labor, so I want to change it.
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Hi Elic!
Yes, that culture should be changed. Everyone should be treated equally. We should have the rights to speak our hearts out and be listened to.
I\'d like to change a Confucian culture in South Korea. Because It makes me feel intimidated.
>> I\'d like to change the Confucian culture in South Korea because it intimidates me.
When I suggest opinions to the older people.
>> When I suggest opinions to older people that me, they don\'t listen.
And it\'s the culture that forces labor, so I want to change it.
>> CORRECT
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