What culture in South Korea would you want to bring back?

2022-07-06 · 첨삭 강사 Elise

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I want to bring back the Samulnori. Most people have enjoying music in South Korea. So It has been here for hundreds of years. But these days, people don\'t think about important to that due to making a living hard without the elderly. And me too. :)

강사 첨삭

Hi Elic!

Yes, we need to preserve our culture [이름]ce it is slowly fading away due to the change in society.

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I want to bring back the Samulnori.

>>I want to bring back the Samul Nori.

Most people have enjoying music in South Korea.

>> Most people enjoy music in South Korea.

So It has been here for hundreds of years.

>> It\'s been like this for hundred of years.

But these days, people don\'t think about important to that due to making a living hard without the elderly.

>> But these days, people don\'t think it\'s important anymore [이름]ce everyone is busy.

And me too. :)

>> I think so too.

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