What culture in South Korea would you want to bring back?
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I actually don\'t want South Korea to bring any culture back from the past.
Most cultures that were existed in the past were not that good cultures.
There were a lot of cultures about discrimination such as gender and age discrimination.
I\'ve read a lot of cases that were existed in the past because of those kinds of cultures.
Because of these reasons, I don\'t want South Korea to bring any culture back from the past.
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Hi [이름]!
I actually don\'t want South Korea to bring any culture back from the past.
Most cultures that were existed in the past were not that good cultures.
There were a lot of cultures about discrimination such as gender and age discrimination.
I\'ve read a lot of cases that were existed in the past because of those kinds of cultures.
Because of these reasons, I don\'t want South Korea to bring any culture back from the past.
>> CORRECT
Most cultures that were existed in the past were not that good cultures.
>> Most cultures that existed in the past are not that good.
There were a lot of cultures about discrimination such as gender and age discrimination.
>> CORRECT
I\'ve read a lot of cases that were existed in the past because of those kinds of cultures.
>> I\'ve read a lot of cases that existed in the past because of those kinds of cultures.
Because of these reasons, I don\'t want South Korea to bring any culture back from the past.
>> CORRECT
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