What dangers do forest animals face. Expand you answer.
학생이 쓴 원문
The forest animals is very sick because corrupt water drink.
And many people hunt the forest animals.
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What dangers do forest animals face. Expand you answer.
The forest animals is very sick because corrupt water drink.
>>> The forest animals are very sick because they drink polluted water.
And many people hunt the forest animals.
>>> Many people also hunt them.
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