What delicacies in South Korea would you recommend to a foreigner who is visiting your country? Expl
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I want to recommend to a foreigner Kimchi.
It is little spicy and salty, and if you go down of South Korea, you can eat more spicy and salty Kimchi.
There are many kinds of Kimchi, and I think Kimchi that is made of cabbage is most delicious.
Kimchi represent South Korea and it is very suitable with rice.
Also I always eat Kimchi because it is suitable with many other foods.
So I want to recommend to a foriegner Kimchi.
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I think foreigners would love Kimchi because it\'s very delicious. I like it as well. I usually use it to make Bokkeum-bap. ^^
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I want to recommend to a foreigner Kimchi.
>> I wan to recommend Kimchi to a foreigner.
It is little spicy and salty, and if you go down of South Korea, you can eat more spicy and salty Kimchi.
>> It is little spicy and salty. If you go to the southern part of South Korea, you can eat kimchi that is more salty and spicy.
There are many kinds of Kimchi, and I think Kimchi that is made of cabbage is most delicious.
>> There are many kinds of Kimchi, and I think Kimchi that is made of cabbage is the most delicious.
Kimchi represent South Korea and it is very suitable with rice.
>> Kimchi represents South Korea and it is very suitable with rice.
Also I always eat Kimchi because it is suitable with many other foods.
>> Also, I always eat Kimchi because it\'s suitable with different kinds of food.
So I want to recommend to a foriegner Kimchi.
>> So I want to recommend Kimchi to a foreigner.
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