What desserts from other countries would you like to try?
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I\'d like to eat France, U.S.A and U.K.
I want to try Fance dessert because the Fance\'s food is very tasty.
And U.S.A\'s dessert is I think is like a strawberry cake.
Lastly U.K is I know fish and chips, the fish and chips are I most expentation that dessert.
Maybe that\'s not a dessert.
These are I like to try these country\'s dessert.
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Hi, [이름]!
Thank you so much for taking time in answering the question. Always do your best!
~ T. Camille
I\'d like to eat France, U.S.A and U.K.
>> I\'d like to eat the desserts from France, the U.S.A and the U.K.
I want to try Fance dessert because the Fance\'s food is very tasty.
>> I want to try French desserts because food from France are very tasty.
And U.S.A\'s dessert is I think is like a strawberry cake.
>> And for the U.S.A\'s dessert, I think I would like to try their strawberry cake.
Lastly U.K is I know fish and chips, the fish and chips are I most expentation that dessert.
>> Lastly, the U.K is known for fish and chips, the fish and chips is what I expect the most more than their desserts.
Maybe that\'s not a dessert.
>> CORRECT! [ Fish and Chips is an appetizer, not a dessert. :) ~ T. Camille ]
These are I like to try these country\'s dessert.
>> These are the desserts from other countries that I want to try.
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