What did you do?
학생이 쓴 원문
Hello~ It is spring season in Korea. The weather was a very warm and fresh,cool wind blowed .I want to go out to see cherry blossom on the street but I couldn\'t. I was in the office until I got home. It\'s a waste of time to stay at home or in the office like today . So
On this weekend, I plan to drive to see cherry blossom with my friends. I\'ll looking forward to do this week.
강사 첨삭
Hello Chory!^^
Thank you for your effort in practicing your writing skills. Keep it up! ^^ Enjoy the rest of your evening.
The weather was a very warm and fresh,cool wind blowed .
>>> The weather was very warm and fresh, cool wind blew.
I want to go out to see cherry blossom on the street but I couldn\'t.
>>>I want to go out to see the Cherry Blossoms on the street, but I couldn\'t.
It\'s a waste of time to stay at home or in the office like today .
>>>It\'s a waste of time to stay at home or in the office like today.
So On this weekend, I plan to drive to see cherry blossom with my friends.
>>>So this weekend, I plan to drive to see the Cherry Blossoms with my friends.
I\'ll looking forward to do this week.
>>>I\'m looking forward to do it this weekend.
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