What did you do a lot when you were young, but now you barely do?
학생이 쓴 원문
Well, if I think about it, I bought a lot of Barbie dolls or princess dolls and did role play.
At that time, girls almost had Barbie dolls or princess dolls and I also had trendable dolls.
I made friends as the doll, I could dress it up, and I could play roles together.
Thanks to this, it became a good childhood memory and I was able to satisfy one of my fantasies.
I was very young, but I think I was able to realize a little bit about fashion and design.
But other people will think I\'m childish if I say I have such a doll now.
Nowdays, I own a cute character doll rather than a doll like that. Most of them are used to decorate my space.
강사 첨삭
Hi, [이름]!
Thank you for sharing your thoughts and memories in this essay! I really enjoyed reading about your experience with dolls and how they brought you joy and creativity as a child. You’ve done a great job explaining how these toys influenced your understanding of fashion and design at a young age.
~ Teacher Gina
Well, if I think about it, I bought a lot of Barbie dolls or princess dolls and did role play.
>> CORRECT.
>> Or: When I think about it, I used to buy a lot of Barbie dolls or princess dolls and role-play with them.At that time, girls almost had Barbie dolls or princess dolls and I also had trendable dolls.
>> At that time, most girls had Barbie dolls or princess dolls, and I also had trendy dolls.
I made friends as the doll, I could dress it up, and I could play roles together.
>> I pretended the doll was my friend, dressed it up, and acted out roles with it.
Thanks to this, it became a good childhood memory and I was able to satisfy one of my fantasies.
>> CORRECT.
>> Or: These experiences became cherished childhood memories and allowed me to fulfill one of my fantasies.I was very young, but I think I was able to realize a little bit about fashion and design.
>> CORRECT.
>> Or: Even as a young child, I think I gained some understanding of fashion and design.But other people will think I\'m childish if I say I have such a doll now.
>> CORRECT.
>> Or: But others might think I’m childish if I admit to having such a doll now.
Nowdays, I own a cute character doll rather than a doll like that.
>> Nowadays, I own a cute character doll rather than a doll like that.
>> Or: Nowadays, I prefer cute character dolls instead of dolls like that.
Most of them are used to decorate my space.
>> CORRECT.
>> Or: I mainly use them to decorate my space.파워잉글리쉬 영어첨삭교정 서비스에 실제로 접수된 글입니다. 작성자와 글에 등장하는 사람·회사 이름, 연락처 등 개인을 알아볼 수 있는 정보는 모두 지웠습니다. 문법 오류는 학습 자료로서의 가치를 위해 원문 그대로 두었습니다.