What did you do at the weekend?
학생이 쓴 원문
I had a meeting with one of my ex-colleagues who was my superordinate at my work. It was very meaningful for me because he talked about how he spent his time after quitting the job and I was able to refer to how I can change my career. After the meeting, as always I worked out and rest to recover myself.
강사 첨삭
I had a meeting with one of my ex-colleagues who was my superordinate at my work.
>> I had a meeting with one of my former colleagues who was my subordinate at my work.
It was very meaningful for me because he talked about how he spent his time after quitting the job and I was able to refer to how I can change my career.
>> CORRECT
After the meeting, as always I worked out and rest to recover myself.
>> CORRECT
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