What did you do before and don’t now?
학생이 쓴 원문
Untill about 2 years ago, I went to the high school almost every day.
As I graduated the high school, I don’t now.
When I was young, I didn’t ride a bike.
Because there was an accident, I’m so scared before.
After becoming this, I ride a bike very well.
In addition, it is one of my hobbies now.
강사 첨삭
Hello Jenna! Once again, I commend your effort in making your composition as well as sharing openly about yourself. They say, people change because change is constant. I think this change applies to everything. I hope you keep your good behavior.~ T. Lyn
Untill about 2 years ago, I went to the high school almost every day.
>>I always went to high school almost every day for about two years.
As I graduated the high school, I don’t now.
As I graduated the high school, I don’t now.
>>I finished my high school days so don\'t go there now.
When I was young, I didn’t ride a bike.
When I was young, I didn’t ride a bike.
>>I didn\'t know how to ride a bike when I was young.
Because there was an accident, I’m so scared before.
Because there was an accident, I’m so scared before.
>>I had an accident then that\'s why I\'m too scared to ride a bike.
After becoming this, I ride a bike very well.
After becoming this, I ride a bike very well.
>>But now, I overcame my fear and learned to ride a bike very well.
In addition, it is one of my hobbies now.
In addition, it is one of my hobbies now.
>>Riding a bike is one of my hobbies now.
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