What did you do last weekend?
학생이 쓴 원문
I went to Busan last weekend.
I took a trip with my friends.
I left early at school and went to the kimpo airport.
We arrived at Busan on a plane.
It\'s been a while since I had this experience beacuse of pendemic.
As soon as we arrived, we ate grilled clam.
강사 첨삭
Hello [이름]!
I\'m jealous of you! You went on such a nice trip. Thanks for sharing the details. See you tomorrow! ^^
~~Teacher Kate
I went to Busan last weekend.>>CORRECT!
I took a trip with my friends.
I took a trip with my friends.
>>CORRECT!
I left early at school and went to the kimpo airport.
I left early at school and went to the kimpo airport.
>>I left early at school and went to Kimpo airport.
We arrived at Busan on a plane.
We arrived at Busan on a plane.
>>We arrived in Busan on a plane.
It\'s been a while since I had this experience beacuse of pendemic.
It\'s been a while since I had this experience beacuse of pendemic.
>>It\'s been a while since I had this experience because of the pandemic.
As soon as we arrived, we ate grilled clam.
As soon as we arrived, we ate grilled clam.
>>CORRECT! (note: That sounds so delicious!)
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