What did you do last weekend?
학생이 쓴 원문
I did house chores like vacuuming and laundry etc...
I exercised at home after house chores.
I usually stay at home during the weekend so I exercise more than week days.
I also prepared break fast meals for next week.
강사 첨삭
Hello, [이름]!
You had a productive weekend! ^^
Please take note of the following corrections:
Removed \"etc.\" (since \"like\" already implies examples).
\"More than weekdays\" → \"more than on weekdays\" (grammatical accuracy).
\"Break fast\" → \"breakfast\" (correct spelling).
~ Trixia
CONTENT:
I did house chores like vacuuming and laundry etc...
- I did house chores like vacuuming and laundry.
I exercised at home after house chores.
- After that, I exercised at home.
I usually stay at home during the weekend so I exercise more than week days.
- I usually stay at home on weekends, so I exercise more than on weekdays.
I also prepared break fast meals for next week.
- I also prepared breakfast meals for the next week.
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