What did you do last weekend?

2019-05-07 · 첨삭 강사 Ally

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I took care of my baby son because he caught a cold last Thursday. I suggested him that he could eat a candy when he takes the medicine, but he rejected it. So, I secretly put the medicine into a glass of milk or a glass of juice to make him take it. It worked. He drank a glass of milk. He slightly noticed that flavor is somewhat different, but he drank it all. In this way I could give him the medicine all and he could feel better. Then, my family went to the amusement park :)

강사 첨삭

Hi, [이름]!


It\'s nice to see that you had a great time last weekend. ^^

And I\'m so amazed about how you found a way to make your son drink his medications!

I will take note of this awesome trick and do it when I have a child of my own someday. ^^



~~t. Ally




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I took care of my baby son because he caught a cold last Thursday.
>> I took care of my son because he caught a cold last Thursday.


 I suggested him that he could eat a candy when he takes the medicine, but he rejected it.

>> I suggested to him that he could eat a piece of candy if he takes the medicine, but he rejected it.


 So, I secretly put the medicine into a glass of milk or a glass of juice to make him take it.
>> So, I secretly mixed the medicine into his glass of milk or  juice to make him drink it.


 It worked. He drank a glass of milk. He slightly noticed that flavor is somewhat different, but he drank it all.

>> It worked! He drank the glass of milk. He slightly noticed that the flavor is somewhat different, but he drank it all.


 In this way I could give him the medicine all and he could feel better.
>> This way, I could give him all the medicine he needs so that he could feel better.


 Then, my family went to the amusement park :)

>> CORRECT!

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