What did you do the day before yesterday and write about your plans for the day after tomorrow.
학생이 쓴 원문
I watched famous tv program, the program\'s name is \"Traveld around the world since I was born seson4 in U.S.A\".
And my plans for the day after tomorrow is going to schoo. There is no exercise at Taekwondo academy, because it is vacation for 6 days from that day.
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What did you do the day before yesterday and write about your plans for the day after tomorrow.
I watched famous tv program, the program\'s name is \"Traveld around the world since I was born seson4 in U.S.A\".
>> I watched a famous TV program called \"Traveling Around the World Since I was Born Season 4 in the U.S.A\".
And my plans for the day after tomorrow is going to school.
>> And my plan for the day after tomorrow is to go to school.
There is no exercise at Taekwondo academy, because it is vacation for 6 days from that day.
>> I don\'t have to go to my Taekwondo academy because we have a vacation for 6 days from that day.
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