What did you do to study for your university entrance exam in high school?

When I entered university, most high school students in Korea wanted to go to university. Of course, some of them got a job as soon as they graduated from high school due to their personal reasons. Parents belived that their children could get a better job if they graduated university. This is not tolally correct but partly correct when we considered social situations at that time in Korea. The competition rate to go to university was very high so, they had to study harder than other students through both study in school and extracurricular study after school. I think I also studied hard as well as other students to get my goal to go to university that I wanted. I received a special lessons with an individual or group to supplyment my shortage field after school.

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ESSAY QUESTION: What did you do to study for your university entrance exam in high school?

When I entered university, most high school students in Korea wanted to go to university.

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or>>During the time I started college, majority of Korean high schools also wanted to study in university.

Of course, some of them got a job as soon as they graduated from high school due to personal reasons.

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>>Naturally, a number of them worked right after high school because of personal reasons.

Parents belived that their children could get a better job if they graduated university.

>>Parents believed that their children can get a better job if they graduated from university.

This is not tolally correct but partly correct when we considered social situations at that time in Korea.

>>This was not totally correct, but partly correct when we are to consider the social situations at that time in Korea.

The competition rate to go to university was very high so, they had to study harder than other students through both study in school and extracurricular study after school.

>>The competition rate of going to university was very high, so each had to study harder than the other students. Both in school and through an extracurricular after-school studies.

I think I also studied hard as well as other students to get my goal to go to university that I wanted.

>>I think, I also studied hard as well as the other students to get my goal of going to the university that I wanted.

I received a special lessons with an individual or group to supplyment my shortage field after school.

>>I received special lessons with an individual or a group after school, to supplement the shortage I had with some subjects.