What did you do today?

2023-02-13 · 첨삭 강사 Kelly

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I worked at my company. Today morning I submitted my company\'s sales and income information in 2022 to public site. And I did a meeting an investor live in Singapore. Actually, He is Korean. So I was not uncomfortable.

강사 첨삭

Good evening, [이름]!^^

Thank you for sharing your activities today.

You were so productive today.

~Kelly^^

I worked at my company.

>> Correct
Today morning I submitted my company\'s sales and income information in 2022 to public site.

>> This morning, I submitted my company\'s sales and income information for 2022 to the public site.
And I did a meeting an investor live in Singapore.

>> I had a meeting with an investor who lives in Singapore.
Actually, He is Korean. So I was not uncomfortable.

>> Correct

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