What did you enjoy the most about Seollal this year?

2025-02-03 · 첨삭 강사 Shay

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i really enjoy seollal food my mom made a lot of sellal food as you know korea traditional food is amazing i wish you could eat korea traditional food and i also wish i could eat Philippines food i always wondering other country food so if i become a cabin crew i try to eat other country food

강사 첨삭

Hi, Bella^^
It seems like you are really a foodie.
You should try some Filipino foods too.
I\'ve tried a lot of Korean foods like bulgogi, kimchi bokkeumbap, japchae, and many more.
_T. SHAY^^
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i really enjoy seollal food
>>I really enjoy Seollal food.
OR: I\'m a really big fan of Seollal food.
my mom made a lot of sellal food
>>My mom made a lot of Seollal food.
as you know korea traditional food is amazing
>>As you know, Korean traditional food is amazing.
i wish you could eat korea traditional food
>>I wish you could eat Korean traditional food.
and i also wish i could eat Philippines food
>>And I also wish I could eat Filipino food.
i always wondering other country food
>>I always wonder about other countries\' food.
OR:
>>I always wonder about other cuisines.
so if i become a cabin crew i try to eat other country food
>>So, if I become a cabin crew, I will try to eat other countries\' food.

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