What did you learn from your parents about parenting?

2014-03-05 · 첨삭 강사 Nina

학생이 쓴 원문

My parents have not pushed me to study hard. They have just watched silently what I was doing. They always trusted me. As most typical Korean parents do, – they are not used to expressing their feeling verbally - they have never said to me “I love you”, however, I could feel how much they loved me from the way they treated me. They have worked so hard and sacrificed their lives for their children. They behaved nicely to neighbors and got respect from them. They have never showed their disappointment even if I failed. They have never hit me under any circumstances and treated me with respect. They were not rich, but they were never poor in their mind. They set a good example for their children. No one is perfect, but I look up to my parents because they were modeling the right behavior for me.

강사 첨삭

Hello Sir [이름]! Wow! I admire your parents because of what you shared tonight. It\'s great that your parents didn\'t force you to study hard but you did. Great! I think these days, some parents push their kids to study to the extent that the children give up on studying. I am so proud of you! You are a great parent too.^^ See you tomorrow! Good night! Take a lot of rest tonight. Teacher Nina   My parents have not pushed me to study hard. >> My parents didn\'t push me to study hard. >> OR: My parents didn\'t force to study hard. They have just watched silently what I was doing. >> Did you mean: They just have watched me silently with the things I did. They always trusted me. >> Correct As most typical Korean parents do, – they are not used to expressing their feeling verbally - they have never said to me “I love you”, however, I could feel how much they loved me from the way they treated me. >> Did you mean: As most typical Korean parents do, they are not used to express their feelings verbally. They never said \"I love you\" to me. However, I could feel how much they love me from the way they treated me. >> OR: As most typical Korean parents do, they are not expressive on how they feel. They never said \"I love you\" to me. However, I was able to feel how much they love me from the way they treat me. They have worked so hard and sacrificed their lives for their children. >> Correct They behaved nicely to neighbors and got respect from them. >> Correct They have never showed their disappointment even if I failed. >> Correct They have never hit me under any circumstances and treated me with respect. >> Correct They were not rich, but they were never poor in their mind. >> Did you mean: They were not rich, but they were never poor in mind. They set a good example for their children. >> Correct No one is perfect, but I look up to my parents because they were modeling the right behavior for me. >> No one is perfect, but I look up to my parents because they were my models about the right behavior.

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