What did you like most about the neighborhood you grew up in?
학생이 쓴 원문
I have lived in my neighborhood since I was 4 years old.
I like good facilities such as a gym and a study room in my neighborhood.
And I also like that a local market is very close to my house.
Because I have lived for a long time, I feel comfortable in my neighborhood.
강사 첨삭
Hello [이름]! :)
I like good facilities such as a gym and a study room in my neighborhood.
And I also like that a local market is very close to my house.
Because I have lived for a long time, I feel comfortable in my neighborhood.
Thank you so much for answering your homework.
Have a wonderful day. :)
- Tricia
I have lived in my neighborhood since I was 4 years old.
>> CORRECT!
>> I like its good facilities such as the gym and the study rooms.
And I also like that a local market is very close to my house.
>> CORRECT!
Because I have lived for a long time, I feel comfortable in my neighborhood.
>> Because I have lived here for a long time, I feel comfortable in my neighborhood.
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