What did your family do in the Lunar New Year?

2021-02-08 · 첨삭 강사 Sharon

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All my family starts gathering at parents’ house in the Lunar New Year. Numbers of all my family are 35 people. They are uncle and aunt, sisters couple, brother couple, cousins couple, and nephews. During about 2 days the Lunar New Year, we have delicious food and play games. Especially, sing and talent show are held. The prize money is given the guys who are good at. Most of men spend time drinking and playing games. Most of women chat or be get massages.

강사 첨삭

Hi [이름] Ha!

That sounds like a lot of fun.

I hope you can do it again in the near future.

For now, be safe and take care of yourself.^^

~~ Teacher Sharon

All my family starts gathering at parents’ house in the Lunar New Year.

>> All members of my family used to gather at my parents\' house on the Lunar New year\'s day.
Numbers of all my family are 35 people.

>> There are 35 people in my family.
They are uncle and aunt, sisters couple, brother couple, cousins couple, and nephews.

>> They are my uncle and aunt, my sisters\' family, my brothers\' family, my cousins\' family, and nephews.
During about 2 days the Lunar New Year, we have delicious food and play games.

>> For two days of the Lunar New year, we have delicious food and we also play games.
Especially, sing and talent show are held.

>> We hold special singing and talent shows.
The prize money is given the guys who are good at.

>> The prize money is given to the best members.
Most of men spend time drinking and playing games.

>> Most of the men spend time drinking and playing games.
Most of women chat or be get massages.

>> Most of the women chat or get massages.

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