What diet have you tried? Did it help?
학생이 쓴 원문
I have not been on a diet ago married.
Becase I was busy and I didn\'t have much time to eat delicious foods .
Because I got off too late and after job I slept deeply from midnight to next noon.
So my weight was suitable.
But after married I\'m experiencing suprising thing.
My weigh is getting heavier and heavier.
I coudln\'t imagine this weight before married.
So I started dieting.
For example, not eating anything after 6 o\'colck evening or stepping stairs from one floor to nineteen floor after job .
Then my weight was shrink 2~3kg.
But after weekend my weight comes back again heavy condition .
Not eating is answer.
강사 첨삭
Hello Miss [이름]. Thank you for this. That\'s funny, but I agree. Not eating is the answer.
- T. Beth
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I have not been on a diet ago married. Becase I was busy and I didn\'t have much time to eat delicious foods .>>> I have not been on a diet before getting married because I have been very busy and I didn\'t have much time to eat delicious food.
Because I got off too late and after job I slept deeply from midnight to next noon.
>>> In addition, I got off from work too late and slept deeply from midnight till noon on the next day.
So my weight was suitable.
>>> So my weight was just right.
>>> OR: So I have never been overweight.
But after married I\'m experiencing suprising thing.
But after married I\'m experiencing suprising thing.
>>> But after getting married, I\'m experiencing a surprising thing.
My weigh is getting heavier and heavier.
My weigh is getting heavier and heavier.
>>> correct.
I coudln\'t imagine this weight before married.
I coudln\'t imagine this weight before married.
>>> I couldn\'t imagine this weight before marriage.
So I started dieting.
>>> correct.
For example, not eating anything after 6 o\'colck evening or stepping stairs from one floor to nineteen floor after job .
For example, not eating anything after 6 o\'colck evening or stepping stairs from one floor to nineteen floor after job .
>>> For example, not eating anything after 6 o\'clock in the evening or taking the stairs from the first floor to nineteenth floor after work.
Then my weight was shrink 2~3kg.
>>> Then I lost weight for about 2-3 kgs.
But after weekend my weight comes back again heavy condition.
But after weekend my weight comes back again heavy condition.
>>> But after the weekend my weight goes up again.
Not eating is answer.
Not eating is answer.
>>> Not eating is the answer.
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