What disease frightens you the most? Why?
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i'm scared about cancer.
because people can't know befofe appearing that symptons.
if we want to know the disease before hurting people,
we need to check a medical examination.
people don't discover a disease, they might die........
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i\'m scared about cancer.
because people can\'t know befofe appearing that symptons.
>> I\'m scared of cancer because people won\'t know they have it until the symptoms start appearing.
if we want to know the disease before hurting people,
we need to check a medical examination.
>> If we want to know what kind of disease we have, we need to undergo a thorough medical examination.
people don\'t discover a disease, they might die........
>> If a person doesn\'t discover his or her disease early, he or she might die.
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