What dish would you like to try for the first time and why?
학생이 쓴 원문
I like seafood than meat like the other person.
that\'s why i like to go East-Asia.
Sometime, i used to remind my good memory which our team went to abroad sea and ate some sea foods.
I am not used to swim but like sea sighting with close friends.
after finishing this covid19 , I will leave this country with my business and enjoy it.
강사 첨삭
Hello, Ethan!
Thank you for sharing your thoughts about my question and for sharing your memories and plan.
I hope that you\'ll get to enjoy eating seafood there in your country while waiting for the end of this COVID-19 pandemic.
Anyway, I hope that you will have a nice day ahead.
Take care and see you later in class. ^^
~Teacher Gina
>> CORRECT.
that\'s why i like to go East-Asia.
that\'s why i like to go East-Asia.
>> That\'s why I like to go to East-Asia.
Sometime, i used to remind my good memory which our team went to abroad sea and ate some sea foods.
>> Sometimes, I used to get reminded by the good memory which I had when our team went abroad and ate some sea food.
>> Or: Sometimes, I used to get reminded by the good memory which I had when our team went overseas and had some seafood.
I am not used to swim but like sea sighting with close friends.
I am not used to swim but like sea sighting with close friends.
>> I am not used to swimming but I like sea sighting with close friends.
after finishing this covid19 , I will leave this country with my business and enjoy it.
after finishing this covid19 , I will leave this country with my business and enjoy it.
>> After this COVID-19 is finished, I will leave this country with my business and enjoy it.
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