What dishes in your country that you can say are good for our health?
학생이 쓴 원문
Many foods in my country are delicious and even good for our health. Koreans like to use vegetables traditionally because our society was agrarian society.
Generally, Korean’s meal have a lot of side dishes. Dishes are composed vegetables, meats. Koreans can eat various nutrients in one meal.
And also, we have a lot of health food. Especially, Samgyetang is very famous as health food in my country. It is eaten usually on summer because Koreans believe if they can overcome hot weather as eating hot food. Furthermore, it is cooked to use health ingredient like ginseng, ginger. So it is represent Korea health food.
I like seaweed soup which is health food and common food. Koreans eats it usual because it is easy to cook and especially eats in birthday. Seaweed is used, so it is good for women. It is also good food for health.
강사 첨삭
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~Teacher Lucy
Many foods in my country are delicious and even good for our health.
>>CORRECT!
Koreans like to use vegetables traditionally because our society was agrarian society.
>>CORRECT!
Generally, Korean’s meal have a lot of side dishes.
>>CORRECT!
Generally, Korean’s meal have a lot of side dishes.
>>CORRECT!
Dishes are composed vegetables, meats.
>>Dishes are composed of vegetables and meats.
Koreans can eat various nutrients in one meal.
>>CORRECT!
And also, we have a lot of health food.
>>CORRECT!
And also, we have a lot of health food.
>>And also, we have a lot of healthy food.
Especially, Samgyetang is very famous as health food in my country.
>> Especially, Samgyetang is very famous as healthy food in my country.
It is eaten usually on summer because Koreans believe if they can overcome hot weather as eating hot food.
>> It is eaten usually in summer because Koreans believe they can overcome hot weather as eating hot food.
Furthermore, it is cooked to use health ingredient like ginseng, ginger.
>>Furthermore, it is cooked to use healthy ingredient like ginseng and ginger.
So it is represent Korea health food.
>>So it represents Korea\'s healthy food.
I like seaweed soup which is health food and common food.
I like seaweed soup which is health food and common food.
>>I like seaweed soup which is healthy food and common food.
Koreans eats it usual because it is easy to cook and especially eats in birthday.
>>Koreans eat it usually because it is easy to cook and especially on birthdays.
Seaweed is used, so it is good for women.
>>CORRECT!
It is also good food for health.
>>CORRECT!
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