What Disney character are you most similar to?
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A lot of Disney characters are optimistic and energetic. I think I\'m a pessimistic and dynamic person so when it comes to that \'energetic\' and \'dynamic\' part, I have a common ground with some Disney characters. It was really difficult to pick up because they are so adorable and lovely. I think I\'m the most similar to \'Jack\' who is a pumpkin king, the main character in The nightmare before Christmas. First, He is challenging himself in a new field. He is a Halloween party expert, but he was attracted to Christmas so he kidnaped Santa Claus and pretended him. In my case, even though my major is avionics so I\'m totally laywoman when it comes to the mechanism, I challenged a competition which is needed mechanical engineering. So I kidnaped Mr.Ahn and enslaved him. Second, Jack prefers dark-colored cloth. I also prefer dark-colored cloth but his fashion style is too much and grotesque. Jack is one of my favorite characters and like pumpkin king, I hope I\'ll be a King in my field someday.
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Hello [이름] [이름]!
I was laughing the whole time while reading your comparison. lol. Please never stop sending in these very amusing compositions. ^^
~~Teacher Kate
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I think I\'m a pessimistic and dynamic person so when it comes to that \'energetic\' and \'dynamic\' part, I have a common ground with some Disney characters.
>>>CORRECT!
It was really difficult to pick up because they are so adorable and lovely.
>>>It was really difficult to pick one because they are so adorable and lovely.
I think I\'m the most similar to \'Jack\' who is a pumpkin king, the main character in The nightmare before Christmas.
>>>CORRECT!
First, He is challenging himself in a new field.
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He is a Halloween party expert, but he was attracted to Christmas so he kidnaped Santa Claus and pretended him.
>>>He is a Halloween party expert, but he was attracted to Christmas so he kidnapped Santa Claus and pretended to be him.
In my case, even though my major is avionics so I\'m totally laywoman when it comes to the mechanism, I challenged a competition which is needed mechanical engineering.
>>>In my case, even though my major is avionics so I\'m totally a laywoman when it comes to the mechanism, I challenged a competition which needed skills in mechanical engineering.
So I kidnapped Mr.Ahn and enslaved him.
>>>CORRECT! (NOTE: So is he Santa Claus now? lol)
Second, Jack prefers dark-colored cloth.
>>>Second, Jack prefers dark-colored clothes.
I also prefer dark-colored cloth but his fashion style is too much and grotesque.
>>>I also prefer dark-colored clothes but his fashion style is much too grotesque.
Jack is one of my favorite characters and like pumpkin king, I hope I\'ll be a King in my field someday.
>>>CORRECT!
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