What Disney character do you least like?
학생이 쓴 원문
Well, I don\'t like villans like a witch or a stepmother. So, whenever I watch the villans, I feel so bad and can\'t understand their minds. I repeat this word \'NO.\' The main characters are so cool and have their own features. So, their lives are so great to watch, but because of villans...... However, I know thanks to villans, some characters can develop. In troubles, they do their best to overcome the problems. Because of this point, although I hate villans, I will never stop watching Disney movies.
강사 첨삭
Hey there, Kimberly!
I admire your thoughts about villains. In your homework, you successfully explained the bad and good points of villains in Disney movies. I agree that villains are cruel by nature, but the problems they cause help shape the main characters better.
I hope you have an amazing weekend!
See you on Monday!
~ Teacher Gela
Well, I don\'t like villans like a witch or a stepmother.
>> Well, I don\'t like villains like a witch or a stepmother.
So, whenever I watch the villans, I feel so bad and can\'t understand their minds.
>> So, whenever I watch the villains, I feel upset and don\'t understand their minds.
I repeat this word \'NO.\'
>> CORRECT
The main characters are so cool and have their own features.
>> CORRECT
So, their lives are so great to watch, but because of villans......
>> So, their lives are so great to watch, but because of villains......
However, I know thanks to villans, some characters can develop.
>> However, I know some characters can develop thanks to villains.
In troubles, they do their best to overcome the problems.
>> When there are troubles, they do their best to overcome the problems.
Because of this point, although I hate villans, I will never stop watching Disney movies.
>> CORRECT
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