What do I do during the Seollal holidays
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Hi! Wendy.
I didn't do homework you gave me two days ago. As you know, I had been taking a good rest in my home and enjoying drink with my hometown friends. I had been a lazy to do homework.:)
However, my holiday ended. I am supposed to go back to the usual life.
Let's talk about the homework What do I do during the Seollal holidays, I have meals with my family and visite grandparents' house to get together as uncles and cousin. on the day of Seolla(It is the first day of ne My mother prepared the Seollal's foods as a rice-soup, Korean style pancakes, meatballs and fruits with aunts.
I would like to your stories during the weekednd
See you soon
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Hello [이름]! :)
Here are your corrections.
I\'ve been so lazy last weekend too.
Sleeping is good!
You can make your sentences simple too.
It\'s better than making it long and complicated.
K - I - S - S
KEEP IT SHORT AND SIMLE :)
Have a good night.
-T. WENDY ^^
Hi! Wendy.>>Hi Wendy!I didn\'t do homework you gave me two days ago.
>>I didn\'t do the homework you gave me two days ago.
As you know, I had been taking a good rest in my home and enjoying drink with my hometown friends.
>>As you know, I had been taking a good rest at home and enjoying drinks with my hometown friends.
I had been a lazy to do homework.:)
>>I had beem so lazy to do the homework.However, my holiday ended.
>>Correct
I am supposed to go back to the usual life. >>CorrectLet\'s talk about the homework What do I do during the Seollal holidays, I have meals with my family
>> Correct
and visite grandparents\' house to get together as uncles and cousin.
>>and cisit my grandparents\' house to have a get together with my uncles and cousins.
on the day of Seolla(It is the first day of ne My mother prepared the Seollal\'s foods as a rice-soup, Korean style pancakes, meatballs and fruits with aunts.>>On Seollal, my mother and my aunts c cake, Korean styles pan cakes, meatballs, and fruits.
(You can make your sentence sime. Remember this, K-I-S-S = Keep It Short and Simple :)I would like to your stories during the weekednd >>I would like to listen to your stories during the weekend.
See you soon>> Correct
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>> Correct
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