what do I do in the perfect weather?
학생이 쓴 원문
The perfect weather for me is that it is a little windy and cool.
Also, the warm weather is perfect for me.
That day, I want to read books I\'m interested in and talk about faith, hope and love with people I love.
강사 첨삭
Hi, [이름] Ha!
Thank you for sharing your answer with me.
I appreciate your answer. I also think that doing the things we love the most during a day of perfect weather would be so awesome.
I wish that when we get to encounter a day like this, we\'ll be able to do the things we like to do. ^^
~Teacher Gina
>> CORRECT.
>> Or: The perfect weather for me is when it\'s a little windy and cool.
Also, the warm weather is perfect for me.
Also, the warm weather is perfect for me.
>> CORRECT.
That day, I want to read books I\'m interested in and talk about faith, hope and love with people I love.
>> CORRECT.
>> Or: On that day, I would like to read books of my interest and talk about faith, hope and, love with people I love.
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