What do I do when I hang out with my friends
학생이 쓴 원문
When with my friends, I always go to the schooi yard and play soccer together. It is very exciting. Also we are playing online games with my friends. It is very happy when I play with my friends.
강사 첨삭
When with my friends, I always go to the schooi yard and play soccer together. It is very exciting. Also we are playing online games with my friends. It is very happy when I play with my friends.
When I am with my friends, I always go to the school yard and we play soccer together. It is very exciting. I also play online games with my friends. I feel happy whenever I play with them.
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