What do I most covet?

2018-09-10 · 첨삭 강사 Jean

학생이 쓴 원문

I covet everything in my neighborhhood. I like to go to garaoke and I like to play baseball game running by small store. I covet the thing that remind me the old memories of my younger days. Todays weather is cloudy so I am focused to study by that reasoning. Your English lesson is useful and beneficient to me very much. I am grateful to you very much about that. Bye.

강사 첨삭

Hello!^^


Thank you for sending your homework.


Cheers!
Jean


I covet everything in my neighborhhood.

>>  correct


 I like to go to garaoke and I like to play baseball game running by small store.

>> I enjoy going to a karaoke and I like playing baseball near a small store in my neighborhood.


 I covet the thing that remind me the old memories of my younger days.

>> I covet the things that reminds me of the memories of my younger days.


 Todays weather is cloudy so I am focused to study by that reasoning.

>> Today\'s weather is cloudy so I am focused on my study.


 Your English lesson is useful and beneficient to me very much. I am grateful to you very much about that.

>> Your English lesson is very much useful and beneficial to me. I am very grateful to you about that.

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