What do Korean students usually do during their summer school vacation? How do they usually spend th
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They are play games and go on a trip they are play games for a lot of times and normal The trip is for four nights and five days
I think Korean students vacation plan is not good.
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What do Korean students usually do during their summer school vacation? How do they usually spend their summer break?
They are play games and go on a trip
>> They play games and go on a trip.
they are play games for a lot of times and normal The trip is for four nights and five days
>> They play games for a long time and their trip usually lasts for four nights and five days.
I think Korean students vacation plan is not good.
>> I think the Korean students\' vacation plan is not good.
>> OR: I don\'t like the way Korean students spend their summer break.
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