What do Koreans think about overweight people?
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According to Kids Health, extra calories are stored as fat. The more extra calories a person eats, the more fat is stored. People spend more time in front of screens, like TVs, phones, and computers, and less time moving around.
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Several decades ago Korean thought that overwight people was the symbol of well-off people.
>>> Several decades ago, Koreans thought that being overweight was equivalent to being well-off.
Therefore Korean called fat belly as the belly of president and boss.
>>> Therefore, Koreans considered fat belly as the belly of the boss or president.
Nowadays it has become known that overweight is the cause of various adult diseases.
>>> Nowadays, it has become known that being overweight can lead to various adult diseases.
Consequently Korean think that overweight and fat belly is the indicator of which he is idle and bad self-regulation.
>>> Consequently, Koreans think that being overweight and having a fat belly is an indicator of idleness and bad self-regulation.
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