What do older kids enjoy playing with the most? Explain.
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The older kids enjoy playing with they friends for example hide-and-sick because they are old so they didn\'t use the phone much.
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What do older kids enjoy playing with the most? Explain.
The older kids enjoy playing with they friends for example hide-and-sick because they are old so they didn\'t use the phone much.
>>> Older kids enjoy playing games like hide-and-seek with their friends. Since they’re a bit older, they don’t use their phones as much and prefer to play together.
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