What do people mean when they say, “you can choose your friends, but you can’t choose your family”?
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What a perfect composition Sir [이름]!
You made me feel great today.
I am so blessed to have a student like you.
Anyway, yes I agree with you,
We can change our destiny but not entirely.
There are factors that we need to consider when making a decision.
We can discuss this in class.
Teacher Nina
I watched a documentary on TV a few days ago.
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It was about a teenager who lives in a small town near the Himalayan Mountain.
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He makes a living with his 60-year old mother by carrying luggage up to the top of the mountain every day.
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He and his mother have to load heavy stuff on their back and climb up to the mountain for a few hours.
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He repeats the job a few times a day.
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He and his mother burst into tears several times on the way to the top of the mountain due to the pain in their back and knees.
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Their crying was not only because of the physical pain, but also their hopeless lives.
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They seem to feel desperate and hopeless.
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The teenager seemed to be filled with anger and blame his mother for his miserable life.
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Watching the scene, it made me wonder whether each person has his/her own destiny.
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If he had been born in a rich family, his life could have changed.
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We neither can choose our parents nor our children.
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Then can we change our destiny on our own?
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Not entirely, but to some degree.
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