What do people mean when they say, “you can choose your friends, but you can’t choose your family”?

2015-07-16 · 첨삭 강사 Nina

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I watched a documentary on TV a few days ago. It was about a teenager who lives in a small town near the Himalayan Mountain. He makes a living with his 60-year old mother by carrying luggage up to the top of the mountain every day. He and his mother have to load heavy stuff on their back and climb up to the mountain for a few hours. He repeats the job a few times a day. He and his mother burst into tears several times on the way to the top of the mountain due to the pain in their back and knees. Their crying was not only because of the physical pain, but also their hopeless lives. They seem to feel desperate and hopeless. The teenager seemed to be filled with anger and blame his mother for his miserable life. Watching the scene, it made me wonder whether each person has his/her own destiny. If he had been born in a rich family, his life could have changed. We neither can choose our parents nor our children. Then can we change our destiny on our own? Not entirely, but to some degree.

강사 첨삭

What a perfect composition Sir [이름]!

You made me feel great today.

I am so blessed to have a student like you.

Anyway, yes I agree with you,

We can change our destiny but not entirely.

There are factors that we need to consider when making a decision.

We can discuss this in class.

Teacher Nina


I watched a documentary on TV a few days ago.

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It was about a teenager who lives in a small town near the Himalayan Mountain.

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He makes a living with his 60-year old mother by carrying luggage up to the top of the mountain every day.

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He and his mother have to load heavy stuff on their back and climb up to the mountain for a few hours.

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He repeats the job a few times a day. 

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He and his mother burst into tears several times on the way to the top of the mountain due to the pain in their back and knees.

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Their crying was not only because of the physical pain, but also their hopeless lives.

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They seem to feel desperate and hopeless.

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The teenager seemed to be filled with anger and blame his mother for his miserable life.

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Watching the scene, it made me wonder whether each person has his/her own destiny.

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If he had been born in a rich family, his life could have changed.

>> correct

We neither can choose our parents nor our children.

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Then can we change our destiny on our own? 

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Not entirely, but to some degree.

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