What do people mean when they say, “you can choose your friends, but you can’t choose your family”?
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It is quite self-explanatory.
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You can choose your friends, but you can’t choose your family.
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No one can choose his/her parents or siblings.
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If you have a friend who betrays you, you can stop contacting him/her.
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You can put miles between you, removing him/her in your heart and your mind.
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However, you cannot live without carrying your family with you in your heart.
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A family will always be with you whenever you are down, sick, deserted by your love one or progress in life and elevate to new heights.
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These are the individuals that have been by your side since day one, and sometimes know you better than you know yourself.
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A family member doesn’t necessarily have to be a blood relative.
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It could simply be someone such as an adoptive parent or sibling.
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In many instances, immediate family members tend to have the greatest impact due to life long bonds that originated from birth.
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Your distant friends will even call you when you become a successful person.
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Friends are there when they need you.
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