What do people play dangerous games like car racing etc? Explain your answer in five sentences.
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Maybe it\'s because of the money.It\'s dangerous, so you have to risk your life.Since it\'s so dangerous, I think I can only give you a lot of money.And it\'s more interesting, it\'s not related to other sports, it\'s not similar, it\'s different, it\'s more eye-catching.And most of all, I think people who like cars will be happy to race with that good car.That\'s it.
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Hello Su A,
Thank you for taking time to answer this question. It only proves that you really wanted to improve in your English skill. Please do check and take note of the corrections for your improvement. I hope it helped you.
Keep up the good work!
Sincerely,
Teacher Annie (^^)
What do people play dangerous games like car racing etc? Explain your answer in five sentences.
Maybe it\'s because of the money.
>>> Maybe it is because of money.
It\'s dangerous, so you have to risk your life.
>>> CORRECT
Since it\'s so dangerous, I think I can only give you a lot of money.
>>> Since it\'s so dangerous, I think it\'s but expected that they are paid with a big amount of money.
And it\'s more interesting, it\'s not related to other sports, it\'s not similar, it\'s different, it\'s more eye-catching.
>>> And it\'s more interesting, it\'s not related to other sports, it\'s not similar, and it\'s different, then it\'s more eye-catching.
And most of all, I think people who like cars will be happy to race with that good car.That\'s it.
>>> And most of all, I think people who like cars will be happy to race driving a great car.That\'s it.
OR: I think it would be a great honor for them to drive a great car.
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