What do people think of men or women crying?

2016-07-18 · 첨삭 강사 Nina

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Crying is a natural emotional response to certain feelings, usually sadness and hurt. People, regardless of gender, can cry when he/she gets emotional like when he/she is sad or even too happy. However, we often feel shame when we disclose our emotions in front of people. We were somewhat taught and raised to refrain ourselves from exposing our feelings. Especially men should be strong all the time and not cry, no matter how hard situation it is. It is still viewed by many as a sign of weakness. Women tend to cry more than men do, most experts concur. Women have more permission to cry. Crying too often can make people uncomfortable, but never crying may not be mentally healthy. For various reasons, a lot of people push down their tears. They suppress them. One of the consequences is that we sort of deaden ourselves, to suppress or not even notice we have those feelings inside. The way that looks to the outside world is depression. Good cry is sometimes necessary.

강사 첨삭

Hello there Sir [이름]. ^^ Thank you for sending this in today. Yes, crying means you are weak to other people. However, in my opinion it shows other people that you are strong.You are strong to express your feelings. Anyway, we can talk more about this in class. See you. Have a great week ahead of you. Teacher Nina   Crying is a natural emotional response to certain feelings, usually sadness and hurt. >> correct People, regardless of gender, can cry when he/she gets emotional like when he/she is sad or even too happy. >> correct However, we often feel shame when we disclose our emotions in front of people. >> Did you mean: However, we often feel ashamned when we disclose our emtoitions in front of people. We were somewhat taught and raised to refrain ourselves from exposing our feelings. >> correct Especially men should be strong all the time and not cry, no matter how hard situation it is. >> correct It is still viewed by many as a sign of weakness. >> correct Women tend to cry more than men do, most experts concur. >> correct Women have more permission to cry. >> correct Crying too often can make people uncomfortable, but never crying may not be mentally healthy. >> correct For various reasons, a lot of people push down their tears. >> correct They suppress them. >> correct One of the consequences is that we sort of deaden ourselves, to suppress or not even notice we have those feelings inside. >> correct The way that looks to the outside world is depression. >> correct Good cry is sometimes necessary. >> correct

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