What do people usually do during the winter season there in South Korea?
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In other seasons, there are a lot of holidays and celebrations but in winter, there is only one holiday.
So many people in South Korea think that winter is just a season of rest.
We usually spend time with our families and also there are various kinds of winter food.
It is great to enjoy a lot of events in winter but winter is very cold in South Korea.
So I think in South Korea, we just think that winter is just a season that people rest.
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It sound like people like to hibernate there in South Korea during winter. hahaha! That sounds relaxing. I wish I can experience the winter season there in too. :)
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In other seasons, there are a lot of holidays and celebrations but in winter, there is only one holiday.
>>> During other seasons, there are a lot of holidays and celebrations but during winter, there is only one.
So many people in South Korea think that winter is just a season of rest.
>> People in South Korea think that winter is meant for resting.
We usually spend time with our families and also there are various kinds of winter food.
>> We usually spend time with our families. There are also various kinds of winter food.
It is great to enjoy a lot of events in winter but winter is very cold in South Korea.
>> It is great to enjoy a lot of events during winter but it is very cold in South Korea.
So I think in South Korea, we just think that winter is just a season that people rest.
>> So I think that most people think that winter is the season to rest.
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