What do people usually do during the winter season there in South Korea?
학생이 쓴 원문
South Korean like to see snow in the winter season.
So we use to travel to places where we can enjoy the snow or enjoy sports related to snow, such as skiing.
Many people go to Gangwon-do in the winter season.
When it snows, Gangwon-do turns into a very beautiful place.
Also there you can enjoy many kinds of snow sports.
강사 첨삭
Hi Jennifer:)
It sound like people like to hibernate there in South Korea during winter. hahaha! That sounds relaxing. I wish I can experience the winter season there in too. :)
South Korean like to see snow in the winter season.
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So we use to travel to places where we can enjoy the snow or enjoy sports related to snow, such as skiing.
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Many people go to Gangwon-do in the winter season.
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When it snows, Gangwon-do turns into a very beautiful place.
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Also there you can enjoy many kinds of snow sports.
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