What do think is the most challenging workout? Why?
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I think that sports is the most challenging workout. Because sports needs a lot of training. Also it has many technique and we compete with others. So sports is the most challenging workout because it needs training and effort.
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I think that sports is the most challenging workout. Because sports needs a lot of training.
>> I think that doing sports is the most challenging workout because it needs a lot of training.
Also it has many technique and we compete with others.
>> Also, it has many techniques and we compete with others.
So sports is the most challenging workout because it needs training and effort.
>> correct
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