What do we usually celebrate?

2020-11-03 · 첨삭 강사 Mayleen

학생이 쓴 원문

When I had a meeting to give my friends and co-workers wedding invitation, They really celebrated to me. And at wedding place, many customers also celebrated me. So, I couldn\'t be forgotten the situation then.

강사 첨삭

Hello, [이름]! ^^,)

Thank you so much for answering your homework.
I have made some modifications.
Practice English whenever you can, okay? ^-^
Also, work on your pronunciation. The more you practice, the faster you\'ll be able to say the words clearly.

Have a good day!

__Teacher Mayleen :)


When I had a meeting to give my friends and co-workers wedding invitation, They really celebrated to me.
>>> It\'s when I invited my friends and co-workers to celebrate with me on my wedding day.
And at wedding place, many customers also celebrated me.
>>> At the wedding venue, many guests celebrated with us.
So, I couldn\'t be forgotten the situation then.
>>> Thus, I couldn\'t forget that day.
>>> OR: Thus, it is something that I can never forget.

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