What do you always put in black and white? Why do you have to do such?

2014-07-03 · 첨삭 강사 Klein

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I always put something in black and white when I have something that should be remembered like anniversaries or works that should be done in due time. First, when I have an appointment or meeting with my family or friends, those schedules should be put in black and white in my calenda or diary. I sometimes used to rely on my memory about meetings with people. The result was frustrating because I was so embarrassed when I forgot the meeting itself. I habitually think about something that should be wriiten on my calenda. Second, I am working in media relations of the court, so I have taken many requests or questions about the court's decisions from journalists. Sometimes I have to deal with many requests at the same time. In this situation, it is really important to put my tasks in black and white and then prioritize these tasks. I think that writing something on your board is very effective way to multitask and fulfill your duties in your daily routine.

강사 첨삭

Good afternoon [이름]! Thank you so much for dropping by this afternoon. Is your schedule lax today? What did you have for lunch? Oh, what has gotten into me? Now I am asking about food. Maybe because I often associate anniversaries with food and when I came across this word while reading your compositions, I was reminded of it. Please bear with me. But [이름], going back to your answer, the capacity of our brain to store information is really limited. The connections of our brain neurons are even so complex. At times, we need to see something to be reminded of what we have to do, just like what you put in your calendar or diary. Having a TO DO LIST sometimes works for me, but sometimes, not that much. Good for you, I think it does! And like what you have written below, my task to complete the feedback while having the class really improved my skills in multitasking but it definitely has its downsides. I think my attention span has become much shorter. Like I mentioned to you many times, I love watching movies over and over and I could really concentrate only on doing it way back then. But these days, I feel like I need to do something else while watching a movie - maybe writing or scribbling, eating, paper cutting, and the like. I feel like I am becoming fidgety. You might say that I am putting too many of my thoughts in black and white right now, so I better wrap this up ASAP. Again, thank you for doing your homework [이름]! This is the first for this month and hopefully, not the last. Stay safe! _Klein I always put something in black and white when I have something that should be remembered like anniversaries or works that should be done in due time. First, when I have an appointment or meeting with my family or friends, those schedules should be put in black and white in my calenda or diary. I sometimes used to rely on my memory about meetings with people. The result was frustrating because I was so embarrassed when I forgot the meeting itself. I habitually think about something that should be wriiten on my calenda. Second, I am working in media relations of the court, so I have taken many requests or questions about the court\'s decisions from journalists. Sometimes I have to deal with many requests at the same time. In this situation, it is really important to put my tasks in black and white and then prioritize these tasks. >>Correct [calendar] I think that writing something on your board is very effective way to multitask and fulfill your duties in your daily routine. >>I think that writing something on your board is [A] very effective way to multitask and fulfill your duties in your daily routine.

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