What do you and your family usually do during Christmas?
학생이 쓴 원문
What do you and your family usually do during Christmas?
Our family goes to the church on Christmas.
When I was young, Christmas was a great event for me.
Nowadays, it is a just holiday.
In past time, the carol songs are playing and decorating a colorful Christmas tree in the street.
All people enjoyed the Christmas festival.
Sometimes I want to feel the same emotion that I felt Christmas season.
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Me too. Sometimes I feel that Christmas is the not the same as it was before. I wish there was a time machine so I can bring back those moments.
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-Teacher EliseOur family goes to the church on Christmas.
When I was young, Christmas was a great event for me.
Nowadays, it is a just holiday.
In past time, the carol songs are playing and decorating a colorful Christmas tree in the street.
All people enjoyed the Christmas festival.
Sometimes I want to feel the same emotion that I felt Christmas season.
>> Our family goes to church on Christmas.
When I was young, Christmas was a great event for me.
>> CORRECT
Nowadays, it is a just holiday.
>> Nowadays, it is just a normal holiday.
In past time, the carol songs are playing and decorating a colorful Christmas tree in the street.
>> In past, carol songs are playing and people decorate Christmas trees on the streets,
All people enjoyed the Christmas festival.
>> Everyone enjoyed Christmas.
Sometimes I want to feel the same emotion that I felt Christmas season.
>> Sometimes I want to feel the same I did before about Christmas.
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